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Thursday, May 20, 2010

Suspense

bulbous fruit by thin,
brittle stem suspended, sweats
a little suspense

4 comments:

human being said...

hey you surpass yourself with each new work!

and just imagine that fruit with those dew-sweats... what an image! both literal and metaphorical...

suspension is the naughty child of attachment and detachment...

Francis Scudellari said...

... and always stuck in between the two :).

Jenny said...

I like the rhythm here and the organic image. "bulbous" I can't stop saying that funny word. :)

Francis Scudellari said...

It is a funny word isn't it?