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Thursday, May 06, 2010

Goat

One goat's load: bucket
of woes; but their source spills on,
long after its scape

7 comments:

Jenny said...

Goats are such quirky smart animals. I like them a lot. There are couple of them in a 4-H farm, close to my house. This is 15 minutes from the town centre, an area of both the urban and the rural.

Very nice rhythm and I really like "goat load".

Joanne Olivieri said...

Love the metaphor :)

Francis Scudellari said...

@Jenny I just watched the movie "The Men Who Stare at Goats" which may have influenced my poetry :). I've not had much first-hand experience with goats, but they seem to be interesting creatures.

@PS Thanks!

human being said...

i read this several times... an each time just 'scapegoat' comes to my mind!
i feel a special affinity for them... and a never-answered why?

Francis Scudellari said...

@hb I read a little about the history of the term "scapegoat" and that's what inspired this. It was a ritual to load a goat up with the people's symbolic sins and send it off into the wilderness.

human being said...

ah... so crows are so clever, eh?
:)

i know about this ritual... just always i ask why... why some other being, creature, thing should be sacrificed for OUR sins... why not accepting the responsibility?... these are the things that should be changed in our societies... should be taught in schools...

so crows are reformers too, eh?

and they are also tattletales...
and sometimes they even backbite:

http://flowersofsulfur.blogspot.com/2010/05/river-has-no-leader.html

:D

Francis Scudellari said...

I appreciate all sides of the crow's personality :)