By Francis Scudellari
I.
One eyed sadness
Weighted to that spot, stays
Still unable
To look a-way (out). Finds
(In) himself, her
A-lone escort. Watches
Once-taken hands
Slip down, grown too heavy ...
Un-moved. Constant
Hearts drop, pooled time rippling
6 comments:
Poignant...at least to me. I'm curious to see pt 2. Nice job Francis.
~JD
Hi Francis,
Can I just say you are amazingly talented! Seriously creative and artistic and brilliant! :-)
Hugs to you,
Jen
Thanks JD ... I'm curious to see how part 2 turns out myself (and part 3), as I'm still working through it ...
Hi Jen,
I'm glad to see you back ... I missed your comments. Of course you're making me blush now, but that's good too. :)
Very good stuff. :) Will be back for the additions.
Thanks Kevin, I just posted the second part.
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