Thursday, October 14, 2010

The dawn of detectives

The diligent dew
clearly knew
continued vigilance
would pay off
with the clues
to smile snatch
a sneaking-by sun,
before its cheat
of red-faced fragments
peeked through


human being said...

what a playful rhythm!

Francis Scudellari said...

I waiver between the impulses for short and long line breaks. I may have to mix the two some time.