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Friday, September 17, 2010

Croak

Paired wasps buzz its pond
Mate-less the bullfrog responds
An awful low croak

3 comments:

human being said...

its
hmmm...
this bullfrog is too possessive!
:D



this is one of your best... among your short works... a novel is condensed here in this little story... each word is a chapter...

fabulous!

Eileen T O'Neill ..... said...

Francis,
At last I find your page and it is nice and short.
An environmently friendly verse..
Easy to capture an image.

Best wishes,
Eileen

Francis Scudellari said...

@hb That's probably why he's mate-less ;).

@Eileen Sometimes my "haiku" are actually about nature :). It's good to see you again.