Friday, September 03, 2010

A quantum vinaigrette over lightly mixed greens

With its sinuous green edge and its delicately
decorative white venation this dewy cress laid
on a fine crystal platter would fit well next to that
chunk of cement facade ensconced in a vitrine
at the Art Institute’s new Louis Sullivan exhibition
There’s little cause to wonder why these particular
atoms once afloat on inchoate seas and awash
in the hummed mumbles of humble vibrations
chose to decohere into this one captivating pattern
from among an infinite variety of mattered schemes
even limiting their choicest range to those paired
colors A tree frog for example its narrow lime toes
suctioned on a broad leaf and its watchful pearl
eyes misconfigured with a blind spot too soon
exploited by a beak spouted peril Or the gallant rider
in uniform myrtle and mounted atop an albino steed
who at a mirthless gallop through routed troops
delivers this message Mother I am so far away
from everything They’re oddly jarred couplings but
with any choice whether slapdash had or carefully
considered what’s our guarantee it will live up to
the iron of romantically clad expectations I have
heard It’s always the salad that gets you in the end

This week at Big Tent Poetry, Jill Crammond-Wickham suggested we gather up words from our everyday lives. I'm not much of an eavesdropper, but I did borrow vocabulary from some diverse sources: Wired magazine (decoherence, humble vibrations, vitrine, and inchoate); The New Yorker (slapdash and It's always the salad that gets you in the end); a cereal box (our guarantee); and Werner Herzog's film Kasper Hauser (tree frog, gallant rider, cress, and Mother I feel so far from everything). To see what words captured the attention of the other poets at BTP, click here.


Anonymous said...

I found this delightfully surreal.
"In the hummed mumbles of humble vibrations" is wonderful to say aloud. And I loved the tree frog.

gautami tripathy said...

It did something in my mind. Like dancing.

pavement musings

Tilly Bud said...

A great poem for reading aloud.

Mary said...

My mind is awhir in words! Nice work.

Elizabeth said...

A word salad of delightful proportions. I'm with Gautami, it made me dance, my eyes popping to the crisp word play and wonderful imagery. I'd say, this one makes you a Master Chef.


flaubert said...

Francis a delightful use of language and images.

Diane T said...

A salad and a frog, huh? And everyone wants to dance, or their minds are awhirr with words! I agree with Viv... surreal. Like artist Salvadore Dahli... excellent writing!

barbara said...

I would read the fantasy novel: Beak of Peril

Harlequin said...

i agree with the surreal feel-- and i liked your intriguing use of everyday words.... a nice project.

Tumblewords: said...

A delightful salad of words and images - the frog with lime green toes, chunk of cement facade..., incredible imagery and sounds. Love it.

Cynthia Short said...

This reminded me of something the Mad hatter would write! VERY imaginative!!

Deb said...

Love the source materials, so rich and varied. Some wonderful images and ideas -- playing on the fact that we & our universe are made of the same carbon-based stew.