Talia lit
a candied wick,
her annual try
to melt away
the cherry-glazed
sadness,
but having
no taste for cake
and no fondness
for pie, she drips pink-
blue stings on her
waiting
palm, its cracks
brimming with waxy
rivers, to set
a striped and flamed
believing, where
as when
the tremors
go out, she'll wish
for tears to rise
and curled smoke to close
the black eyes of
heaven
— Francis Scudellari
5 comments:
nice longer sustained images. this really works for me. bravo!
Wow!
This seems very sad to me.
@Gerry Thanks. I've been trying to go to shorter lines, but images that unfold more slowly.
@Susan I'm glad you liked it :).
@RNSANE Yes, a little sad this time, but that's the story that came to me.
wow! So beautifully told. I am glad I had a chance to stop by today!
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