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Thursday, January 07, 2010

Chatter

She chose to chat
of piled-up chattel
mucking their lives, but chastened
and gripped by the cheerless
cold, his teeth could only chatter

(for Poetwist's Twitter prompt: Chat)

1 comment:

Jenny said...

I enjoy the wordplay here. The sounds of "chat", "chattel", "chastened" and "cheerless" create texture and a great bouncing rhythm. Again, a very musical feel.