not poetry. not fiction. a life, and something in between.
so soft and feathery like wind...
Thanks... I'm thinking I should change the last line to the present tense...
and this change makes this work much deeper and enigmatic... 'cause his breath and wind become a bit unified...this is the way i feel...
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so soft and feathery like wind...
Thanks... I'm thinking I should change the last line to the present tense...
and this change makes this work much deeper and enigmatic... 'cause his breath and wind become a bit unified...
this is the way i feel...
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