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Saturday, February 13, 2010

Entreating

Sulfurous flash draws
tang from seared flesh, entreating
answers... any kind

3 comments:

Harlequin said...

I love haiku;
the ambiguity here is wistful and edgy

Jenny said...

There is something here that makes me think of stretched sinew. I think it is the interesting sounds. I pondered about that a while when I read this for the first time in the hypermodern "Buzz".

Francis Scudellari said...

@Harlequin Thanks... that's the combo I'm usually aiming for.

@Jenny It's a good association to make. I'm still trying to figure out where buzz fits between Facebook and Twitter.