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Wednesday, March 12, 2008

Two eyes, part one

By Francis Scudellari

I.
One eyed sadness
Weighted to that spot, stays
Still unable
To look a-way (out). Finds
(In) himself, her
A-lone escort. Watches
Once-taken hands
Slip down, grown too heavy ...
Un-moved. Constant
Hearts drop, pooled time rippling

6 comments:

Anonymous said...

Poignant...at least to me. I'm curious to see pt 2. Nice job Francis.
~JD

Jennifer Jones said...

Hi Francis,

Can I just say you are amazingly talented! Seriously creative and artistic and brilliant! :-)

Hugs to you,

Jen

Francis Scudellari said...

Thanks JD ... I'm curious to see how part 2 turns out myself (and part 3), as I'm still working through it ...

Francis Scudellari said...

Hi Jen,

I'm glad to see you back ... I missed your comments. Of course you're making me blush now, but that's good too. :)

Anonymous said...

Very good stuff. :) Will be back for the additions.

Francis Scudellari said...

Thanks Kevin, I just posted the second part.