not poetry. not fiction. a life, and something in between.
Hm. Just one eye? Inneresting. I love the rhymes in this one.
What if you really really like the squiggles?
lovely! use of imagery & metaphor!is this from the anthology you have just published?
@Twitches It's like cataract surgery, one eye at a time :).@Brenda They can be mesmerizing, and the rain drop probably brings its own set of squiggles.@Smita No, these short pieces are just my way of keeping the metaphorical pen limber.
ah... a wish... or a fish? :Dfor the change of perspective... for a new viewpoint... a new understanding!this reminds me of Sohrab Sepehri:we should wash the eyeswe should see differentlywe should wash the words...we should close our umbrellasand walk in the raini loved the multiple image you created... eye eyedropeye raineye tearchange....transformationfabulous work!
Thanks hb... by transforming what we see, we can transform who we are :)
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Hm. Just one eye? Inneresting. I love the rhymes in this one.
What if you really really like the squiggles?
lovely! use of imagery & metaphor!
is this from the anthology you have just published?
@Twitches It's like cataract surgery, one eye at a time :).
@Brenda They can be mesmerizing, and the rain drop probably brings its own set of squiggles.
@Smita No, these short pieces are just my way of keeping the metaphorical pen limber.
ah... a wish... or a fish? :D
for the change of perspective... for a new viewpoint... a new understanding!
this reminds me of Sohrab Sepehri:
we should wash the eyes
we should see differently
we should wash the words
...
we should close our umbrellas
and walk in the rain
i loved the multiple image you created...
eye eyedrop
eye rain
eye tear
change....
transformation
fabulous work!
Thanks hb... by transforming what we see, we can transform who we are :)
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