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Tuesday, July 27, 2010

Bats

If you asked me what
it is I miss most from
an easy moving childhood,
I’d answer with the simple
toss of a pebble into thick
summer air, like we did at dusk
to trick the echo-location of bats,
and watch them twist,
circle, dive after the false
apparition of a meal.
Far from ideals, in a white-
nosed now, their winged numbers are
receding as quickly as
those innocent days when
a small stone felt like it
could work big magic.

6 comments:

brenda w said...

Francis, Bats swirl above all of our lives at some point. I love the little bug eaters. In your piece, I especially love "In a white-nosed now..." Thanks for this piece. I can see your bats twisting at the pebble's toss. Gorgeous image...

Unknown said...

trust you to write on 'bats' only you could have done that!
I like the last line very much! about how a pebble can work like magic!

Francis Scudellari said...

@Brenda Thanks... it probably wasn't the nicest way to treat those bats, but it was fun to watch them chase the rocks. We have very few bats here in Chicago, but I did have one sneak into my apartment building a couple summers ago.

@Smita Bats are fascinating creatures! :)

human being said...

children innocently do lots of cruel things...

innocence here means lack of awareness... not knowing... they are all absorbed in their own self... and its joys...


but i cannot understand missing that innocence!
think it is more cruel to yearn for that innocence...

you forgive crow for being such a rude creature (in fact this is one of their main features... they cannot observe social codes)


i felt bad after reading this!
i think you had a role in their reduction! you broke their hearts!
also the heart of those small stones... because stones never want to cheat people...


ah... one might say i'm breaking your heart too...
well if you die tomorrow, they can come and arrest me...
:D

(crows cannot keep their ugly beak shut up... another feature!)

Francis Scudellari said...

@hb I can't argue with your logic. It's the bats I miss, not the stone throwing. Maybe if I promise not to throw any more rocks, they'll come back?

My heart's too stone-hard to be broken :)

human being said...

phew!
so you won't die!

suddenly i noticed i will miss you if you die!

:D




never break your promise... even if they won't...