i.
Carousel whispers
build to a scream, blurring
gentle grins till ghoulish
with the swallowed-up
asking how to step off
ii.
Two hungry blades sweep.
Pared flesh spins off in pink curls,
leaving seedless cores.
iii.
When I moony howl
will you clench your jowls, affright
or will you yowl back?
11 comments:
Ohhhhhhhhhh that was Scary! real creepy one :)
These words spin like the carousel. Such dizzying horror. Especially love "moony howl".
@Avijeet Thanks... I think the first has the most fright potential :).
@Gerry A recent viewing of the remake of Wolfman inspired the howl.
i try to listen silently
so that i understand the cause...
I try to defy cause and effect, but the howl may be for howling sake.
there is always a cause
yet most of the time it's a raaz
(raaz) in persian: mystery
It could be a raaz why I howl, or it could be the raaz is why I howl.
>>will you yowl back?<<
I'll start in a whisper that builds to a scream.
Wait, I'm falling into a feedback vortex, don't worry, I'll be back ...
neat poem.
"yowl back", definitely!
Yowl is the response I was looking for...
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