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Monday, April 25, 2011

He'll waste away with its wanting

He feels the blue-black
chattering of his cheap tattoos.

They pinwheel around
and they tumble down
to greet a broken-track braille
and join its scabby trailing off,
stammering dead-end tempts
to the diminished lots
of unmarked tissue.

You can t-taste it too,
first that rubbery sharp squeeze,
then a streamlined steel’s b-bite
with its c-creeping warmth,
its p-piquant glee
and its promises to quench
those g-glimpses of eternity.

Each promise gets
reneged as soon as it’s replenished.

There’s an art to this steal;
its con is his meat and bone.



This is in response to the weekly Wordle prompt provided by Brenda Warren. She's set up a new site for prompts called A Wordling Whirl of Sundays. I did slightly change a couple of the words.

2 comments:

flaubert said...

Francis, you have such a wonderful way with these wordles. I love this part;
"Each promise gets
reneged as soon as it’s replenished."

btw you should post a link over at Brenda's, so others can read this:)

Pamela

brenda w said...

I love the first line, it makes me remember being in the tattoist's chair. The italicized bit is creepy. Your wordle work is always among my favorites. The images here and the voice are intense. I appreciate the sound of this piece.
~Brenda