ah... this seed is so sweet too! :) really loved the way you gave depth to a seemingly little incident... taking yourself... and then the readers (thus the whole universe)into that microcosm!
the ending is terrific!
floating aloof inside a big black eye inside a big black i
:)
this is our world... perhaps the slipped seeds may change it into a new thing...
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ah... this seed is so sweet too!
:)
really loved the way you gave depth to a seemingly little incident... taking yourself... and then the readers (thus the whole universe)into that microcosm!
the ending is terrific!
floating aloof inside a big black eye
inside a big black i
:)
this is our world... perhaps the slipped seeds may change it into a new thing...
Francis,
I really liked this for the imagery your words evoked.
Sunflowers so sweet, but so sad once they start to wither.....
Eileen
your use of imagery leaves me speechless!
yes, you are right, I was looking for ur poems in the wrong place. thanks for correcting me.
and do drop by...
@hb Yes, nothing goes to waste here... what's discarded is soon transformed :).
@Eileen Their fleeting beauty is what makes them so special.
@Smita I'm glad you found the right place :). I've just visited and left a comment.
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