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Saturday, November 07, 2009

Brazen-minded breeze

Brazen-minded breeze
tugs at the sun's cotton robe
eying his nude blush

2 comments:

gerry boyd said...

lovely. echos of buck mulligan. think "eying" should be "eyeing", but why quibble?

Francis Scudellari said...

Hi Gerry,
That's an interesting comparison, I'll have to take another gander at Joyce and revisit Buck. I actually had "eyeing" but my spell check flags it. Looking it up in the dictionary, it seems that both are correct.