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Monday, June 20, 2011

Our future is looking up

We have our stories
etched in bone,
echoed by
this temple’s pulsing.

Tangled brown threads
play there and know
from their fibers,
not one word is true.

A serpent didn’t usurp.

It still has legs,
but they’re hidden where
no bitter gods can take them.

Stardust isn’t light.

It falls, not angels
prideful or worldly, as the sky
sifts a fateless effluence.

Neither snake
nor cosmic particle
will spark our clinging
gossamer’s tear.

The claws to rip it
can come back to us,
if we’ll use them.

Then we’ll twist
up the slit
and see our else,
no longer idly watching.


This week's wordle prompt at The Sunday Whirl took 13 words from Nicole Nicholson's excellent poem Homeward. These are always a challenge, but this week was a little more so for me. I tried to go against my usual instincts and write a piece that contains a bit of optimism.

4 comments:

brenda w said...

Optimism suits you. :) It starts strong with stories etched in bones...but I really love the last stanza, and the inclusion of angels.

dk said...

'Clinging gossamer's tear' strange, jarring, and highly provocative phrase. Lovely work.
dk

flaubert said...

Wow, Francis, this is really good. You've created some incredible images.

Pamela

Henry Clemmons said...

I liked a "gossamers tear". Nice. Well done. Great wordling.