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Wednesday, November 03, 2010

A political postmortem

In the yeasty yearning for
fuzzy was – its sleep-
deprived, batted eye trimmed with
never-were, prickly lashes
long-frayed from the thumb-on-thumb
of constant tugging –
we loosen our hug
around bugaboo learnings
and lose the gripping
way to clear but not soothing,
white-nighted will be.

4 comments:

Anonymous said...

Francis,

This somewhat convoluted but utterly delightful wordplay makes more sense than half the candidates who were running!! Welcome to Poets United, and keep on posting!

Amy Barlow Liberatore

Anonymous said...

Francis - that is such a great use of words - I loved it. It describes the feeling of, 'everyone I voted for lost' so very well. Even the ones who won, have lost. . . we'll never feel that yeasty yearning for fuzzy again. loved it.

McDishy said...

Great work Francis. I hope your writing liberates you as much as your readers!

Francis Scudellari said...

@Amy Thanks for the welcome, and for stopping by. I have a weakness for convolution :)

@HL Well, most of the local candidates I voted for actually won, but that's because the Democrats have got Chicago locked up. The national results were a bit depressing though. You're right, no one is going to win with this election except the monied interests that bought it.

@McD It definitely helps clear my mind and chest :)