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Tuesday, February 02, 2010

Dots

Dots small and large squat
All tiresomely unwilling
to connect and dance

2 comments:

Jenny said...

I think the sense of dots pushing back and forth like magnetic opposites is very striking here. I also think of floaters in the eye's vitreous body and the numbness of insomnia. The surreal feeling in this poem is described in a great way.

Francis Scudellari said...

I think that's the appeal of the shorter forms to me, it allows for so much to go "unsaid" and can create some interesting interpretations.