not poetry. not fiction. a life, and something in between.
.and when he feelsspring's hand on his shoulderhis brushtrembles....
but spring is still a long way off!
.he knowsthe kiss is so far offto shorten the distancehe saves a little greenand a patch of yellowin the gray....
@hb Thanks so much for extending the poem by introducing spring to it. I like the idea of saving a little patch of green and yellow.
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and when he feels
spring's hand
on his shoulder
his brush
trembles...
.
but spring is still a long way off!
.
he knows
the kiss is so far off
to shorten the distance
he saves a little green
and a patch of yellow
in
the
gray...
.
@hb Thanks so much for extending the poem by introducing spring to it. I like the idea of saving a little patch of green and yellow.
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