It's an unusual phrase to build a poem around, so I decided to try something different and write a haiku. As an extra bonus, I also created a companion drawing that better captures my conception of a squeezed tube of paste.
A coiled plastic snake
Desperately squeezed till flat
Splatters its venom
Desperately squeezed till flat
Splatters its venom
13 comments:
I would hang this up on my wall - awesome! *big smiley*
It's very cool (I mean the drawing, but of course, the haiku is too). :)
Awesome!!! extremely creative. I didn't know one could come up with an artistic venture with a toothpaste (grins) and even with a haiku too.
Hai!!!
This made me smile. lol
Very nice, indeed worth a Digg.
@Chuck That's the highest compliment you could give :).
@2WriteHands I definitely spent much more time on the drawing than the haiku, but I liked how both turned out.
@Jena The world is my sandbox :).
@Cooper Mission accomplished then :).
@Guy Diggs are much appreciated.
Must be flavored toothpaste maybe blackberry, because it has a nice purple color. Kids would like it.
Who would have thought that toothpaste could be beautiful?
@BC I'd like some blackberry flavored toothpaste too :).
@Amanda There is much beauty hidden in the commonplace. We just need to rediscover it :).
Probably a silly question....
do you sell prints? or originals?
Or no?
@Ruthie Not a silly question at all. I've given away a few originals to friends and family. I'd love to make prints at some point, and I would be willing to sell the originals as well under the right circumstances. Once I get my domain up and going, I'll spend some time investigating next steps.
Francis,
Love the Hiaku and animorphic toothpaste. Very creative and intersting.
cheers
dale
Thanks Dale ... I hope you'll be joining in the fun for the next Doodle Week. I'm getting my sketch pad ready.
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