This is another poem born of a structured randomness. The words were mostly provided by the Twitter Magnets Web application, but I embellished, smoothed and stretched them out. I think of it as a variation on the idea of "found poetry." Here's the final result:
Wholesome clouded kiss
By Francis Scudellari
In a wholesome clouded kiss,
her puffed pink lips lock
to the hardened lines
of this wandering,
thunder-headed stranger
The heavy blanketing peace
of her color-blinded sadness
woolly pulls apart
to here's frayed-edges,
their bitter-quilted coupling
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Wednesday, August 19, 2009
Thursday, August 13, 2009
Learning from Randomness
This is another poetic exercise born of my Twittering. Through a fellow poet's tweeted stream, I discovered a Web app called Twitter Magnets. It's the Internet's version of the poetry game that used refrigerator magnets to build poems from a random selection of words.
I tried to use as many of the words and punctuation offered as I could without going over the 120-character limit. This is what I came up with:
Needle
By Francis Scudellari
A soft yesterday's sharp reproach,
always present,
pricks my calloused heart
I growl out glass
caught between gritted teeth
and two-fisted embrace it
Pulling the knot tight,
I flick this needle's glint
a spiked drop, acceptance
I tried to use as many of the words and punctuation offered as I could without going over the 120-character limit. This is what I came up with:
soft yesterday of reproach, always presentI really liked some of the unusual word combinations it forced me to use. I liked them so much, in fact, I decided to build on the skeleton of that magnet exercise to create the following slightly longer poem.
picks cold heart
i growl glass,
two-fist embrace it.
flick needle?
Needle
By Francis Scudellari
A soft yesterday's sharp reproach,
always present,
pricks my calloused heart
I growl out glass
caught between gritted teeth
and two-fisted embrace it
Pulling the knot tight,
I flick this needle's glint
a spiked drop, acceptance
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