tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-31030337.post639753630981448590..comments2023-10-29T10:21:04.035-04:00Comments on Caught In The Stream: Looking for an openingFrancis Scudellarihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01008685302028451297noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-31030337.post-18967374306053229262009-02-21T01:38:00.000-05:002009-02-21T01:38:00.000-05:00@JD I think it's different mostly in subject matte...@JD I think it's different mostly in subject matter, and I'm trying to be a bit more realistic than usual, but that will be more apparent when I post the whole thing.Francis Scudellarihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01008685302028451297noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-31030337.post-81276315226923852102009-02-20T09:33:00.000-05:002009-02-20T09:33:00.000-05:00Interesting. I usually start from the beginning a...Interesting. I usually start from the beginning and build. Honestly, I can't see much difference in style then what you usually do but I like it :-) Curious to see the whole piece.<BR/>~JDAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-31030337.post-59912001453836217272009-02-12T14:48:00.000-05:002009-02-12T14:48:00.000-05:00@Jena I think as I write more, the picture should ...@Jena I think as I write more, the picture should become clearer. I am trying to do more story telling with in my poems. You're welcome to use any drawing you like, any time. I'm flattered that you want to use them :)<BR/><BR/>@Tom Thanks! I'll push ahead soon.<BR/><BR/>@Hanna Ciao! I think you're on the right track, but I still have much more to write :).Francis Scudellarihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01008685302028451297noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-31030337.post-49879131332252387712009-02-12T09:11:00.000-05:002009-02-12T09:11:00.000-05:00Hi Francis! fortissimo concetto! una donna è qualu...Hi Francis! <BR/>fortissimo concetto! <BR/>una donna è qualunque, finchè non scopre lei le parole d'amore..però la scenografia è dentro te e solo te....lei ne è ignara, non sa nulla.. tu è soltanto tu ami, ma la fai l'artefice.<BR/>Non so se mi spiego in italiano semplifivatofihannahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16684159686480267801noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-31030337.post-88779819269653596642009-02-11T08:42:00.000-05:002009-02-11T08:42:00.000-05:00Hi Francis,I have already used the ghost image at ...Hi Francis,<BR/><BR/>I have already used the ghost image at Associated Content with one of my poems. It's a simple poem, but I hope you'll like it. Thanks for allowing me to use your drawing.<BR/><BR/>http://www.associatedcontent.com/article/1465096/come_back_to_me_my_love.html?cat=42Jena Islehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16609925272840089993noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-31030337.post-65028658032563003322009-02-11T08:00:00.000-05:002009-02-11T08:00:00.000-05:00Keep at it! Your start is strong!Keep at it! Your start is strong!Tom Atkinshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15068850208360958008noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-31030337.post-51332231789441284702009-02-10T23:23:00.000-05:002009-02-10T23:23:00.000-05:00This one paints a picture, I can't seem to fathom....This one paints a picture, I can't seem to fathom. But I like how you presented the imagery; like some writing gurus would say to writers: "Show your readers, don't tell."<BR/><BR/>Keep posting and God bless.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com