tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-31030337.post5605431289443470275..comments2023-10-29T10:21:04.035-04:00Comments on Caught In The Stream: Secret NotesFrancis Scudellarihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01008685302028451297noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-31030337.post-22866072004293373402010-06-10T14:27:52.100-04:002010-06-10T14:27:52.100-04:00yes Francis... you are right! when i was finished,...yes Francis... you are right! when i was finished, i was really suprised by the outcome... told myslef, ah... you are always the same mad crow!<br />:)<br /><br /><br /><br />angie...<br />thanks a lot for the encouragement... glad you liked it!<br />yes this fever is so healing... when i'm playing with words, i'm in the happiest mood and feel so powerful...<br />:)human beinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09232419187783429903noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-31030337.post-76134933368317443252010-06-10T13:57:49.254-04:002010-06-10T13:57:49.254-04:00@Susan You definitely should, it's addictive (...@Susan You definitely should, it's addictive (especially if you're a puzzle-solver).<br /><br />@hb It's interesting how the individual poet's voice comes through even with such "found" poetry. That poem is very distinctly yours, even if the words are borrowed.<br /><br />@Derrick I found much creativity in the wholesale destruction of the text :).<br /><br />@Angie I seem to be attracted to the darkly comical.<br /><br />@Barb The reward is always a trick :).<br /><br />@Linda I wasn't crazy about the source material, so I guess I had to subvert it in some way.<br /><br />@Irene Thanks!Francis Scudellarihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01008685302028451297noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-31030337.post-2501094656256287052010-06-10T06:11:11.458-04:002010-06-10T06:11:11.458-04:00Great vignette of secret notes Francis.Great vignette of secret notes Francis.irenehttp://enerihot.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-31030337.post-87848672217265232412010-06-09T23:24:43.364-04:002010-06-09T23:24:43.364-04:00Ah, the piano piece. Love that second stanza...I h...Ah, the piano piece. Love that second stanza...I had to giggle about weakness after being elbowed suddenly, but it was a delightful turn. Totally delightful. Thanks!Linda Goinhttp://lindagoin.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-31030337.post-46381782793652474972010-06-09T19:54:31.639-04:002010-06-09T19:54:31.639-04:00It's like one of those comic haunted house mov...It's like one of those comic haunted house movies--stay all night and get the million.<br />I don't think all that many even found those secret notes.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07490035808297516510noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-31030337.post-82839987931297012412010-06-09T17:57:36.143-04:002010-06-09T17:57:36.143-04:00this is hilarious:
Dreadful people played
with sw...this is hilarious:<br /><br />Dreadful people played<br />with swollen fingers,<br />weak after<br />suddenly being elbowed.<br /><br /><br />and human being -- love it! I'm so glad you caught the fever. it's a good fever!angiehttp://therer2doors.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-31030337.post-87844804504243195862010-06-09T17:29:02.754-04:002010-06-09T17:29:02.754-04:00Trust you to find a very different image, Francis ...Trust you to find a very different image, Francis and so economical. Great!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00861397533660827678noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-31030337.post-40102979119390050012010-06-09T17:04:03.423-04:002010-06-09T17:04:03.423-04:00oh... i forgot the link:
http://wavepoetry.com/er...oh... i forgot the link:<br /><br />http://wavepoetry.com/erasures/erasures.php?poemid=2480human beinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09232419187783429903noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-31030337.post-81766878895972097692010-06-09T16:45:24.193-04:002010-06-09T16:45:24.193-04:00i checked the source and found your work so creati...i checked the source and found your work so creative and beautiful...<br />and i couldn't resist... i played along... this is my version:<br /><br /><br /><br /><br />the very first time...<br />==========================<br /><br />the room<br />the mirrors<br />the curtains<br />the faces<br /><br />the very first time<br />her fingers<br />noticed<br />the piano<br /><br />the fire<br />burning<br />afresh<br />with the day<br /><br /><br /><br /><br />:Dhuman beinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09232419187783429903noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-31030337.post-40235632637775714752010-06-09T15:54:44.993-04:002010-06-09T15:54:44.993-04:00That is so cool, Francis! I'm going to give it...That is so cool, Francis! I'm going to give it a shot tonight. :Dsusan sonnenhttp://web.me.com/susansonnen/Susan_Sonnens_musings/Blog/Blog.htmlnoreply@blogger.com