tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-31030337.post5277895378325621563..comments2023-10-29T10:21:04.035-04:00Comments on Caught In The Stream: Silver WingsFrancis Scudellarihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01008685302028451297noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-31030337.post-62990314093871147792010-07-16T03:17:59.073-04:002010-07-16T03:17:59.073-04:00@hb The event had such a surreal quality that the ...@hb The event had such a surreal quality that the visuals came to me pretty quickly.<br /><br />@harlequin I appreciate the feedback. It looks like I'll be reading this piece and two others at the exhibit of the piece that inspired it.Francis Scudellarihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01008685302028451297noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-31030337.post-5306394095621926092010-07-13T23:36:37.779-04:002010-07-13T23:36:37.779-04:00this is lovely; the word choices and letter sounds...this is lovely; the word choices and letter sounds make the whole reading ( and reflecting ) experience quite compelling.Harlequinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04964772119118368322noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-31030337.post-54834528745419013382010-07-13T14:36:03.689-04:002010-07-13T14:36:03.689-04:00this has captured the essence of the event so impr...this has captured the essence of the event so impressively... <br />the image of snow and the contrast it creates is masterly done!human beinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09232419187783429903noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-31030337.post-75975316742617776042010-07-13T12:05:56.977-04:002010-07-13T12:05:56.977-04:00@Jenny Thanks... now I have to work on a piece to ...@Jenny Thanks... now I have to work on a piece to go with jb's photos.Francis Scudellarihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01008685302028451297noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-31030337.post-69443001178104674812010-07-13T12:02:37.764-04:002010-07-13T12:02:37.764-04:00@Chris Thanks! I think such mixed media can be ver...@Chris Thanks! I think such mixed media can be very powerful, especially with the right collaborators. I hope this one works out.<br /><br />@lhw Once George is finished with the piece (and ok with the poem), I'll try to post an image.Francis Scudellarihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01008685302028451297noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-31030337.post-31690884471833602782010-07-13T12:01:20.834-04:002010-07-13T12:01:20.834-04:00This poem is full of great visuals and sounds. Ver...This poem is full of great visuals and sounds. Very frightfull. <br /><br />I really like Kokines' work too. Good luck with the installation.<br /><br />word veri: ineast<br /><br />geeJenny https://www.blogger.com/profile/17128326064445770505noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-31030337.post-48233922474209727842010-07-13T10:28:57.422-04:002010-07-13T10:28:57.422-04:00it's quite frightening; I hope we'll see t...it's quite frightening; I hope we'll see the painting to go with it.<br /><br />http://thelaughinghousewife.wordpress.comAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-31030337.post-26453838623379901632010-07-12T21:12:26.633-04:002010-07-12T21:12:26.633-04:00There's a nice flow to this and I like the &qu...There's a nice flow to this and I like the "should" repetition. My favorite part is the last line "how could I write that canvas," because there's lots of ways to take that, not only as you writing about a piece of canvas, but as a more metaphorical theme about mixing art styles and media to create something altogether new.Chrishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06566915585420471046noreply@blogger.com